It may be useful to look at the Hybrid approach as I could use prototyping when composing the emails to send to applicants. This is part of the Agile methodology a it won't be completed before production. Also, I shouldn't use Gabrielles name but call her by her job title 'Software Manager'. Throughout the report I refer to the system as a form but it would be more clear if I called it an application process or system.
It is important to clarify ideas more instead of using vague language. Also, I need to reference facts and ideas from others unless the information is my own opinion.
Regarding the technical side, I should separate the asp.net sides and not mix the language with frameworks such as MVC. It needs to be clear that the server side scripting languages I am comparing is ASP and PHP. I need to add more information about SQL Server and research ODBC.
Points to consider when writing the full report are:
- Widows and Orphans combinations
- Cross reference diagrams and captions
- User Chapters
- Referencing
- Evaluation- use 1st person
- Page numbers
